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Jill Nov 14 - Prelude (follow up after receiving feedback)

Didi- Raising the Stakes exercise by Characters

AFTER- Opening Scene reworked.

Jill - Day 3 - Prelude - AFTER

day 3 Rewrite Janeen Grandma Rogers

Day 3 Janeen Grandma Rogers BEFORE

Laila - Day 3 - Uncle Mauri - BEFORE

Kathleen - Day 3 - Before and After - Emeraude

Laila - Day #2 - Exposition & Flow - Wine and Cheese - BEFORE

Jill Day 2 - Chapter 4 - Before

Day 2 Never a Dull Moments

Gabriella - Before -Day 2

Didi- Day 2- opening scene- Before

Laila - Day 1 - Drip Drip - Dialogue Edit - AFTER

Didi-Day 1 -After (remove names)

Chapter 3 - On the Bus

Kathleen - Day 2 - siblings - before and after

Day 1 pg 1st edit

Tommy - Journal - BEFORE

KATHLEEN - SIBLINGS - DAY - BEFORE

Didi- Scenes 3-5- Next Draft

Jill - Prelude & Chapter 1

The Road to Jalalabad

Laila - Drip Drip - Day 1